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Chapter 2 of 10
Sentences
One idea at a time.
Length and load
Difficulty comes from packing several ideas into one sentence, not from word length. Splitting an overloaded sentence is the single most effective edit available.
- Vary length; a short sentence after long ones lands hard.
- Keep subject and verb close together.
Order
Put familiar information at the start of a sentence and new information at the end. That flow is what makes paragraphs feel connected rather than listed.